In the selection By the Shores of Silver Lake, we learn that Laura’s sister is blind. Laura must “see out loud” for her sister Mary. Laura describes everything that she sees in great detail so that Mary can “see” in her mind’s eye what Laura sees.
A writer can do the same thing for his/her readers. Descriptive writing vividly portrays a person, place, or thing in such a way that the reader can visualize (see in the mind’s eye) the topic and enter into the writer’s experience.
This week, we are writing our final drafts for our first personal narrative. A personal narrative tells the true story of what happened to you. Personal narratives provide great opportunities for descriptive writing. Click here for a Personal Narrative Sample Paper.
We will use descriptive writing to bring our narratives to life in the reader’s mind. Click here for our Personal Narrative Evaluation Rubric.
Please check back soon to read our personal narratives and enjoy our use of descriptive language.
Students’ Personal Narratives
- Brandon’s “A Fun Day at LEGOLAND”
- Daniela’s “An Exciting Day at Disneyland”
- Mayerly’s “A Great Day at Duck Park”
- Pablo’s “A Great Day in Las Vegas”
- Priscila’s “Perfect Day at the Fair”
- Samantha’s “My Birthday”‘
- Samuel’s “When I Learned How to Ride a Skateboard”
- Zaira’s “The Perfect Birthday Bash”